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Don't Look Behind You!
by Sabrina


BEWARE, THIS IS SCARY FOR SMALL CHILDREN (at least I think it is)

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n a stormy night, I'm always near you. I go to your house in the middle of the night, READY to eat your soul. I'm coming to get you, and I'm across the street from you. I'm walking to your house. I'm walking up your driveway and up on the porch. I'm cutting down the door with my chainsaw. I'm walking through the kitchen, and I'm now in the living room. I'm walking slowly... ever so slowly... up the stairs. I'm walking through the upstairs hallway. I've now made it to your room, where I watch you thinking away about the ideas for your scary story. You're not even aware of the sound of the squeaking door as I open it to your room. You don't see me, because you're too busy tapping away on your stupid keyboard (I know I said that he was thinking before, but now he turned back to the computer and began typing). So, for that reason, you don't even realize me getting closer... CLOSER... to your chair. Now, I'm right behind you, waiting to strike at you. I start opening my mouth, and sucking the life out of you, like a vacuum cleaner. You FINALLY notice me. So, you look at my reflection through the computer screen.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!" you scream, and I'm about to suck the life out of you like I never sucked a soul out of anyone before. You shouldn't have looked behind you!

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AN (Author's Note): Sorry if this is gory. This is my first time writing this. And sorry if it isn't too scary. I don't think I'm too good at writing. I read it myself, and it gave me chills! Once again, parents, beware of your children, idk if this is okay with them.

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